Sugarcube Ver. Released! Changes and new content


The sugarcube demo is here!

As promised, today is my birthday and I've managed to finish polishing the twine demo!  This update includes only the prologue and chapter 1 and a sneak peek into chapter 2, chapter 2 is still being rewritten, though the first part has already been released to patrons. 

If you played the original and are wondering what changes there are, continue reading! This list, however, only includes changes made to chapter 1, obviously I can't spoil what other changes are coming.

Changes from CS version:

  • There is now a prologue! This new piece of content serves to start building up stats and make the reader familiar with Kenji (MC's father).
  • More grief, more sadness. Since I'm more familiar with the characters, the setting and the tone of the story (not to mention I have started to deal with my own grief in the process), I have started to include more references to MC's father and how they deal with grief.
  • In that same line of ideas, there is now a grief system. This system is still in a bit of a test phase as I figure out when it's appropiate to call it. However, it's main intention is changing dialogue and narrative according to how MC is dealing with grief (anger, avoidance, depression or bargaining).
  • There is also a revamped trait system. We have bold and prudent, bitter and kind, playful and serious, and finally serious and emotional. These stats will be, most likely, locked in after chapter 2 (I think I actually reached a point in which playful/serious may have enough points to get locked in.
  • Meeting Hazuki and Masa is now entirely different. Meeting K is a little similar, but it has been refined to suit the better built story and my improved writing skills.
  • Autosaves every time a chapter ends.
  • Less choices, more content. This is specially true in chapter 2. However, it also means that when there is a choice it tends to have more content to it than before, when I struggled to come up with choices and content to accompany it.
  • MC's personality is now more defined, which makes reading (and writing!) them more entertaining.
  • Bres has now changed to Utahigashi. Utahigashi (the area where the forest is) is now a part of Koyori (a state part of Kyou, and the place Ginji is Warlord to).
  • Sennza are now shinmoku.

And that's it for now! Thank you for reading and I'll see you on the next update!

Also, if you want to get a glimpse to extra content, unreleased scenes and the alpha build you can check out my patreon

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